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I just saw your gracious reply re what i forget (maybe i wanted to share a kyouka w. Ogasawara in it?) but delighted you got the Dolphin, read by maybe one-person a year & New Year bk (for what was about 1/10th of the ku/themes that might have been finished to replace Blyth's seasons of haiku but for circumstances in life requiring concentration on humor AND lack of support=reviews/$ from the world of haiku as William Higginson, who alone among the big wheels realized I was doing what no other could and not competition, passed away) maybe seen by two people a year.

I, too, dreamed in Japanese -- as well as English -- and love yr attitude/s and interests. Re the man in the moon, I thought he was supposed to have been more busy pruning that tree than planting, though the moon sure cudda used a johny appleseed! I had no idea about the olive bloom and must reread to fix it in my memory. I do not believe I have used "cinnabar" for the katsura but i like that it sounds fragrant as lady's men were said to be so and Katsura-o or otoko was supposed to be like Narihira -- and may substitute it for whatever i wrote in scores of translations. I am unsure how you taxed such a guy as a "monster" though you are correct re warnings as men do not like ma-otoko (pro paramours & maybe cheaters as well) seducing their women for uwaki. Among the countless ku and kyouka, I particularly like all the nostril hair reading AND the Narihira connection turning him into a bi or trans w/ help from the tree as katsura homophonically puns a wig or rather and extension (as court women also used) -- what the hell is the correct word for THAT? Let me c+f Katsurao amd give you a few of whatever pops up first in my huge file

世の人に後ろを見せぬ月なれば一分も跡へ引かぬ桂男 花江戸住E3-5 1787

As the Moon is known for not showing us earthlings its backside,

Katsurao won’t retreat even a moment (an Edoite in his pride?)

若衆の尻つきを見て離れえぬ念者や桂男なるらん 貞富T1672 FB

If the moon is like a gay youth’s rump, those glued to the sight

who stay up all night might one & all best be called Katsurao!

月見魔は、稚児や若衆に惚れ惚れに成る念者の如くかと。

Let us call men drawn to buns the shape of which puns “moon,”

Katsurao after that lunar tree-man said to love girls & wakashu.

若衆も女の子も求愛する人を桂男とも称しすれば良いと。

He belongs with those enthralled by the sight of a wakashu’s bum,

shaped like the moon in this pun – Sir Katsura was the first one!

桂男は初若衆好き、か稚児愛念者という発想が可笑しい。

桂雄の色におされて大空にひとつも見えぬ夜這星かな みしか(みじか?)栗花集

Overwhelmed by moon-man Katsurao’s beauty, in the whole sky

not one of those so-called falling stars can be seen out swiving.

角力より晴天十日かつら男を相手にくまん此月見酒 柳百朶e7-2-114

After Sumo, facing a clear tenth-day sky, lover-boy Katsurao

and I had ourselves a drinking bout of moon-viewing sake.

秋の夜の月のかつらの長かもじ女とも見えつ男なりひら  月洞軒 元禄

Katsurao, Moon-man of Fall – his name sounds like “wig” or “tress”

so, he must be Narihira, a man known to wear a dress!

おじゃれ女のように尾花に招かせて桂男の宿をする露 朝雲K1822 薄=Miscanthus

Attracted by beckoning tail-flower plumes, that tease Miss Canthus,

Katsurao, our moon-man, often stays over in the Dew-drop Inn.

I'll stop at a handful -- online i would guess poems by Chie no naishi & Yomo no Akara are easiest to find. None of the above is typical but the typical ones are maybe 10% of the total. NONE, however, are monsters.

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Greg Pringle's avatar

You neglected to mention 桂皮...

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